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tears rolling down the chest
that heaves from hte coughing
escaping my stretched lungs
trying to get a breath but
can only sit here
choking on the words to say
to the face that smiles as I
stare at the wall
that cradles my attention and thoughts
like the hands now holding my head
which throbs with the things you say
and I only wish that I could
ignore the fact that I am
waiting for you to help me up
but hours later you are still here
and I am still sitting
staying, praying, dying...
for the last chance
for bitter sweet vengeance
©2004-2009 ~militantinsanity
:iconmilitantinsanity:

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not so good night...

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:iconneek-zique:
nice... full of emotion... and no poem is bad that has that... :thumbsup:

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And, in the end, the love you take
Is equal to the love you make.

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:iconsilver-rage:
Wow pretty powerful stuff.

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I will survive somehow I always do.
:iconmilitantinsanity:
-bows- I try I try

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Give my Heart a Jumpstart.
Hookup your Cables and Let's Go!
<3
:iconmilitantinsanity:
why thank you dearest

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Give my Heart a Jumpstart.
Hookup your Cables and Let's Go!
<3
:iconkika12119:
incredible!!! :+fav: i adore your writing!

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"Bitch, what you don't know about me I can just about squeeze in the Grand fucking Canyon. Did you know I always wanted to be a dancer in Vegas?"
:iconmilitantinsanity:
omg.. wow... thank you very much!

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Give my Heart a Jumpstart.
Hookup your Cables and Let's Go!
<3
:iconshadowedfire:
wow, i really like this one :clap:

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Fear the reckoning of those you have wronged. -- Old Norse Proverb

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